Sunday, December 6, 2015

Storytelling Week 12: The Bridge to Heaven

"Good morning, class, please have a seat."
"Good morning, Mrs. Myers."

"Kids, gather round. I want to tell you a story about chasing a dream."
"What is the story called?" said Sally.
"It's called The Bridge to Heaven."

"The story begins with a little boy about your age. He was a very sad little boy," said Mrs. Myers.
"Why was he so sad?"asked Sally.

"Well, Sally, this boy had lost both of his parents in a car accident when he was a baby and was now living in foster care. This boy had a dream. He wanted to see his parents again. One night while he was sleeping, an angel came to his bed and said, 'God has heard your prayers, sweet child. But it will not be easy. Here is what you must do,' and the angel proceeded to tell the boy that he needed to build a bridge to heaven to see his parents again."
"But, Mrs. Myers, that's impossible. How can he build that bridge?" asked Sally.

"Oh, Sally, you ask so many questions, haha. The boy had to find a lot of bricks. He would go to the empty lot next to the foster home and steal bricks from there. As soon as he touched the bricks, they became invisible, so no one would know what he was doing. He also turned invisible while he worked on the bridge."
"Wow," said the whole class in unison.

"He worked on building the bridge for fifteen years. He was twenty when he finally finished it. He was ready to climb the bridge to see his family again. So he climbed for two days and two nights until finally he saw a bright light and a big shiny golden gate. He went to the gate and knocked, 'Excuse me, are my parents here? May I please see them?' the boy said. 'Who are you?' asked the guard. 'I don't know. My parents died when I was so young. I forgot who I really am. That is why I am here to meet them. I want to find out who I am,' replied the boy."
"Did the boy get to meet his parents?" asked Jim.


"Yes, he did. He parents came outside the golden gates and talked with him for many days. He learned a lot of things by talking to his parents. He learned his dad was a scientist and his mom was a heart doctor. They laughed and they cried. But the most important moment for the boy came when his dad said, 'Son, you didn't need us to know who you are. You have known all along who you are. Look at this bridge you built! Look at this big dream you chased, son. You are a dreamer. Go back to earth and chase another dream.' So the boy went back to earth, and he began working to help other kids who had lost parents like he had."

*Ring*

"Okay, kids, time for lunch."

The kids ran out of the room like wild animals. Then Mr. Sim came into Mrs. Myers' room. "Why do you always tell the kids that story?"
"I want them to know that nothing is impossible. All too often we try to tell them what they cannot do. I want them to know that the only thing that defines them is themselves."

Author's Note:
Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I really had a lot of fun writing this one. This story is based off the story of the bridge to Lanka from the Ramayana. Crossing the water to Lanka seemed like an impossible task for Rama, but then he was told that a monkey named Nala could make rocks float. So, they were able to build the bridge and cross the water. I refer to this story in two ways: the bridge and the impossibility of the task. I also wanted to focus on dreaming big because I honestly believe people have stopped chasing their dreams. I personally wish people would never stop chasing them. My mom always told me that I could be anything I wanted to be, and I believe her. Building a bridge to heaven to see a loved one really is an impossible task, but luckily in stories we can do the impossible. Unlike the story of the Bridge to Lanka, my character had no help building his bridge. I wanted to show the main character as strong and independent. I also chose a story time setting because I felt like it was an ideal way to share the deeper message of my story. So that is the inspiration behind my story.

Bibliography:
Ramayana by Buck. 1976.

Image Information:
Heaven

5 comments:

  1. Hi Hayley! I thought your story was a very original and creative re-telling of the story of Rama and the bridge. You did a really good job of taking the bridge motif and applying it to another story, adding to its meaning. I also really liked your author's note. It was great how you were so inspired by your mom, and I think the importance of that lesson really shows in the story.

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  2. Hey Hayley, I think this was a great story! I liked that you used the school framework for your story to play out, a modern setting for an old tale. I also like how you didn't go along with the story as it was told originally which helps to really move it into the modern realm of exaggeration. Also I felt a touch of growth mindset in your final touch with the encouraging words.

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  3. Hey Hayley!
    I really enjoyed your story! My favorite thing about was the moral of it. I do agree with you that a lot people have stopped chasing their dreams. I believe that people are choosing stability and comfort instead of following their dreams. This is because they are scared of taking risks. I did not notice any errors. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your stories!

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  4. Hi Hayley! I absolutely loved this story. It was so refreshing to read such an uplifting story. It seems like a lot of the stories I've read in this class can be pretty dark and they often don't have happy endings, but yours was so inspirational! I love that you explained your inspiration behind the story in your author's note. I agree, people should never stop chasing their dreams! Great work, and I hope to get the chance to read some more of your work!

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  5. Well this is just the sweetest story! First of all, I liked how you set up the storytelling- a teacher sharing with her classroom. I also love the innocent interjections from the class. It makes the whole thing very realistic. Secondly, I love the story that the teacher is telling. The determination shown by the little boy who grows into a young man is so honorable. I’m glad he finally got to meet his parents, but more importantly he learned a lot about who he was in the process. I was kind of nervous that the story was going to take a dark turn, like his parents wouldn’t be what he expected or something. I was relieved, however, to see that you kept the story light and happy. I also liked that you included details about his life after the encounter with his parents. I wonder if he shares his story with children, or if anyone would even believe him! Well done on a very imaginative story!

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